Saturday, November 7, 2015

Media Bias Pastiche: Rewritten Article

Unruly Anti-Choice Protesters Face Potential Arrest After Illegal Demonstration
 STATE      NOV 2, 2015   |   8:05PM    DAYTON, OH
Anti-abortionists attempted to interrupt a celebratory pro-choice rally in Dayton, Ohio this Sunday. Offenders were politely asked to leave by the police, and as matters escalated authorities had to resort to threatening their arrests.

Bryan Kemper, leader of conservative group ‘Stand True’, was amongst the group of rebels protesting against abortion at the scene. He was joined by a small group of dissidents, who aimed to impede the pro-abortion rally. The rally, at Courthouse Square, was lauding the successes of the non-profit ‘Planned Parenthood’ health organization, as well as those of other abortion providers in Dayton. Supporters had applied for a permit to gather in advance.

Around an hour into the event, Kemper put down his sign and was seen taking photos of the pro-choice supporters to use in promoting the ideology on his website. Kemper also crashed the event wearing an insensitive T-shirt with anti-abortion propaganda on it.

As Kemper and his group closed in on the peaceful gathering, members of the pro-choice rally began to feel uncomfortable, and called the Dayton police in for assistance. According to the law, since rally organizers had a permit to gather and hold a rally, the anti-abortionists’ invasions were illegal. They were then politely asked by the police to leave to the sidewalk area outside of Courthouse Square.

Protesters ignored these repeated warnings of the police, and Kemper even accosted one police officer personally, claiming that they were “denying him access to public property”. He stubbornly insisted on this allegation, even after officials explained that Kemper and his group were providing a menace to the peaceful rally with their aggressive signs and uniforms.

Kemper continued harassing the police, asserting that “he had no sign” even though it was visibly on the floor next to him. He also showed no respect for authority, and demanded to see the permit of the pro-choice group to have a rally. Eventually, the Dayton police had to threaten to arrest him lest he become violent. At that point, Kemper and his group began to panic and vacated the scene.

Also present at the illegal anti-abortionist protests were members of Kemper’s family. His 10 year old son was forced to hold “pro-life” signs and protest alongside his father. On the signs of the anti-choice rebels were propaganda-like slogans and images.

Protesters also exploited “victims” of abortion by showing images of them at the rally. This victimization of women who have made strong choices about their bodies is used to claim that abortion is worse for women, although this starkly contrasts reality: less than 1% of women will experience a major complication from the procedure, and the risk of death from childbirth is ten times the risk of death from abortion.

Given the ubiquity of choice these days, naysayers like these seem almost medieval. They are, however, still a frequent occurrence, especially in majority conservative states like Ohio, which also scores lower than average on the Diversity Index.

Nevertheless, incidents like these remind the public to make sure the basic human rights of choice and freedom do not get taken from us.

Sources:
http://smartblogs.com/leadership/2012/10/08/examining-ohios-political-leanings/
http://web.mit.edu/pro-choice/www/facts.html
http://healthresearchfunding.org/20-remarkable-pro-choice-abortion-facts-statistics/
http://www.comparativepoliticseconomics.com/conservative.html


3 comments:

  1. Athena-- overall I really enjoyed reading both the original article and the rewritten one. I felt as if you effectively captured the wide spectrum of ideologies the media supports. I liked your use of descriptive verbs (e.g. "forced") to paint the issue in a different light. As a suggestion, maybe you could include more statistics that show how the states with pro-life sentiment are less developed. That's more of a bonus than a necessity, though.

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  2. Hey great article! Got some nice extra insights from it, like how you used quotations to inspire that sense of doubt in the audience (like "he had no sign"). I feel like they can actually influence what people will doubt within the article and what they'll take as a solid fact. Also, love the way that you're pretty much saying they're backwards by saying "seem almost medieval."

    One comment I have probably is probably just my fault for being new to the issue, but i found it hard to figure out who you were talking about and i had to scroll up a couple of times just to be sure. I think anybody who was well informed in the topic wouldn't have that issue though.

    Also, one thing i found interesting was how you changed the bias without really changing the actual purpose of the article. It felt like there's not that much of a use of Pathos in your article , and that keeps the news tone in it, thus hiding the bias. It just made me think, to when does an article stop bein just biased and instead change its purpose completely..?

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  3. This article is very well written Athena! I really like how in your introduction, you state that the police initially asked the offenders 'politely.' This immediately establishes how the police is not at fault when matters escalated and this manipulation of diction is seen greatly in articles so you imitated this technique really well. Something I'd do differently is add a quote from the police officer or from someone similar since this article portrays a bias favouring the law.

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